(1) One of the most popular festivals in Southeast Asia is Diwali, the Hindu festival of lights. (2) Diwali means “row of lights.” (3) Several legends claim that the festival was created to celebrate the homecoming of Lord Rama after more than 14 years of exile. (4) After Lord Rama defeated the demon Ravana, the people placed small lanterns outside of their houses to light their leader’s way home. (5) Today, the festival honors many different gods and traditions. (6) Most people view Diwali as a celebration of hope and a time to remember that good will always overcome evil. (7) People celebrate the five-day festival with an abundance of lights, fireworks, food, and music. (8) Many families also pay their respects to different gods by building small altars in their homes. Jordan has decided that moving sentence 4 before sentence 3 will improve the organization of the report. Is Jordan correct in her revision?
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Yes she is right She has to move 4th statement
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Yes, she can move the 4th sentence before the 3rd sentence.
Explanation:
The 3rd sentence from the question is about several legends declaring that the festival was made to celebrate the homecoming of Lord Rama after more than 14 years of exile.
And the 4th sentence of this question is about after Lord Rama defeated the demon Ravana, the humans placed small little lanterns outside of their houses to light their leader’s way home." The 4th sentence depicts the story behind this festival and the 3rd sentence seems like a continuation of the story presented in the 4th sentence.
So, hence, it is correct to move the 4th sentence before the 3rd sentence.
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