1) Today Mt. Everest is drawing attention all
2)the negative reasons. The entire route
3)the climbers, follow reach the top is
littered with
4)rubbish and is in sore, need,cleaning up.
5)The rubbish strewn along mountain slopes
6)includes oxygen cylinder ,bottles food cans
omission
Answers
1) attention for all
2)route that the
3)follow to reach
4)need of cleaning
5)along the mountain
6)bottles and food cans
Today Mt. Everest is attracting consideration for all the contradictory reasons. The complete route that the climbers, accompany to touch the Everest is scattered with debris and is in sore condition and compel for cleaning up all the remnants. The waste scattered along the mountain hills involves oxygen cylinder, containers, and vegetable cans which is polluting the Environment.
Answer for the given incorrect and error paragraph is:
Today Mt. Everest is drawing attention all because of the negative reasons.
The entire route and the climbers, followed by reached the top which is littered with rubbish and is in sore need for cleaning up.
The rubbish strewn along the mountain slipes includes an oxygen cylinder, bottles, and food cans omissions.
2.route-that-the
3. follow - to - reach
4. need - of - cleaning
5. along - the - mountain
6. bottles - and - food