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E Read the paragraph. Identify the errors in the sentences and rewrite the
paragraph correctly in your notebook.
Last month Sushmitha went on a holiday with her family to Dalhousie. In the
morning she woke up to the sight of the lush green forest and the majestic
mountain. At night she gazed at the starry skies. One morning as she was
looking out of the window of her cottages, she saw several, large, dark doud
covering the blue skies. Soon, the sun hid behind the dark cloud. Sushmitha
saw a flock of bird flying across the sky. They had probably anticipated the
rain and were heading towards their nests. A little later, she heard thunders.
There was another sound that alarmed her. This sound did not come from the
sky. The sound came from the lawn in the rear of the cottage. She went to the
windows that overlooked the lawn. To her amazement, she saw some pretty
peacock. That day she learnt that there are some bird that avoid the rain, while
there are some that enjoy it, just like human,
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Answer 1

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Answer 2

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Last month Sushmitha went on a holiday with her family to Dalhousie. In the morning she woke up to the sight of the lush green forest and the majestic mountain. At night she gazed at the starry skies. One morning as she was looking out of the window of her cottages, she saw several, large, dark doud covering the blue skies. Soon, the sun hid behind the dark cloud. Sushmitha saw a flock of bird flying across the sky. They had probably anticipated the rain and were heading towards their nests. A little later, she heard thunders. There was another sound that alarmed her. This sound did not come from the sky. The sound came from the lawn in the rear of the cottage. She went to the windows that overlooked the lawn. To her amazement, she saw some pretty peacock. That day she learnt that there are some bird that avoid the rain, while there are some that enjoy it, just like human.

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