3. Analytical paragrapher
The pie chart shows the comparson of
different kinds of energy products
of France in two years summarize the information by selecting
and reporting the main features
and make comparison where relevant
Answers
Answer:
Overall, there is lovely presentation. However, it will be better if you can add following thingsFirstly, it is not an essay rather it is a report. Though you can provide conclusion at the end of the report, it is better to provide overview at the beginning I mean after the paraphrase. You can start like, Overall, it can said that” Just you will mention the key point in the over view part.Secondly, instead of writing 10%, 5%, 30%, 48%, you can write 5%= insignificant amount/ 30%= precisely one third, 48%= almost half, etc.
Explanation:
The two pie charts illustrate the difference in percentage of the production of energy in France from 1995 to 2005. Overall, Gas was the most produced energy at the beginning of the period whereas Coal took the place of Gas in 2005.On the other hand, energies other than Gas, Petro, Coal and Nuclear comprise the lowest share in energy production over the period.