Question

3. Revise the following sentences by using phrases and clauses to eliminate unnecessary
conjunctions.
2. Our trip to Daniel's Seaside Resort took four hours, and the air conditioning did not work
in the car, so we had to roll down the windows and a bee flew in.
b. We went outside and the sun burned my skin and the mosquitoes were everywhere, so
we went back inside and we swam in the Indoor pool and sat in the hot tub until our
fingers were wrinkled.
The resort was smaller than we expected and more rustic, so we stayed in the main lodge
most of the time and we played a lot of ping pong and we sat by the empty fireplace and
talked
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Answer 1

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