Question

3.
The following paragraph has not been edited. There is one error in each
line. Write the error and the correction in your answer-book against the
correct blank number.
Error
Correction
The Earth is one of the eight
planet that go around the Sun. In ancient
times, the people who study the stars
noticed that while certain heaven bodies
seemed fixed in a sky, others seemed
to move around.​

Answer 1

English is a universal language. One should know its grammar properly to convey an individual's message successfully. The given passage is edited as such.

Explanation:

• The Earth is one of the eight planets that go around the Sun. In ancient times, the people who studied the stars noticed that while some heaven bodies seemed fixed in the sky, others seem to move around.​

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Answer 2

The Earth is one of the eight  

planets that go around the Sun. In ancient  

times, the people who studied the stars

noticed that while certain heavenly bodies  

seemed fixed in the sky, others seemed

to move around.​

Explanation:

• 'Planets' will be in plural form because 'eight' of them have been considered.
• The past tense 'studied' will be used because the sentence speaks of the action done in the past.
• 'Heavenly' will be the correct form of the word to be used.
• The definite article 'the' will be used to denote 'sky'.

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