Question

7th January 2018

11:00 AM



I am so happy today because I won the award for the best student of the school. I done my best during the whole session and never took any leave.

On this day annual day celebration is celebrated on our school and all the awards are given on this day only. Many guests are called and a chief guest as well.

When I was told that I would be given the best student award, I was so happy and when I informed my family they were so happy and everyone congratulated me but my Grand Father was the most happiest person. Then I approached my Grand Father to attend the ceremony and he agreed.


When I was receiving the award, my Grand Father was the person who clapped a lot and gave a standing ovation. When I went to my Grand Father after holding my trophy he kissed on my forehead and gave me many blessings. It was a dream day for me.


And in the evening my Grand Father gave me a present by saying "this is for your achievement my little princess".



I am so happy.


*** I have seen this diary in your website. I found some mistakes in organisational as well as grammatical

1. In the last paragraph it is written that he was already informed and for that he was happy so need not to write in the present tense in the first.

2. "Annual day celebration is celebrated" is bad english rather either it will be " Annual day is celebrated" or "annual day celebration took place"

3. " celebrated on our schhol" , "on" is wrong it will be "in".

In the first para "done my best during the whole session and never took any leave"

"I done" is wrong either " I have done" or "I did"

So please careful before writing any thing in the webs. Students will learn wrong things.

Answer 1

Answer:

congratulations, I know that now time is too late to congrates you but I happy that you have got the best student award