Question

A day on planet mars.
I want some tips of this essay

Answer 1

Answer:

How can we live on Mars there is no atmosphere

But still you can write

I felt a low gravitational pull

I saw the tallest mountain there

There was too silence because I can't come out of my spacesuit

I met with aliens and we played Rock paper scissors and hide & seek

Answer 2

Answer:

I would suggest that you could write about what you see, what you did, what were some of the hard times, how you lived there, what did you eat how was it etc.

Explanation:

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