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a) Gone ( were) the days when classical dancing b) was( anything )your family forced on you as a kid. c) Today, more and more people are turning( on) d) it even as adults, to learn a new skill( but) tone up e) their body. Classical dance is much more effective than (the ) f) weight loss exercise. Not only does it (helps) one g) relieve stress but it also( give) balance, strength. and flexibility.
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Answered by orangesquirrel
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The given lines are edited as follows:

A) Gone are the days when classical dancing

[ The simple present form of the verb needs to be used].

b) was something your family forced on you as a kid.

[ Used as a pronoun]

c) Today, more and more people are turning to

[ The correct preposition is 'to' as it refers to people taking up something new]

d) it even as adults, to learn a new skill and tone up

[ Conjunction 'and' is used to join two purposes]

e) their body. Classical dance is much more effective than

[ Usage of the article 'the' is not required here]

f) weight loss exercise. Not only does it help one

[ A plural verb needs to be used after 'does' ]

g) relieve stress but it also gives balance, strength and flexibility.

[ Singular subject is followed by singular verb].

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