A group of teachers make a study of the students’ learning (a) ____ ____ problems. The teachers discovered that a students who did poorly (b) ____ ____ in Maths and Art can do very well in other subjects. (c) ____ ____ The students who did poorly in reading, almost do poorly in (d) ____ ____ all other courses
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A group of teachers (a) made a study of the students’ learning problems. The teachers discovered that (b) the students who did poorly in Maths and Art (c) could do very well in other subjects. The students who did poorly in reading, almost (d) did poorly in all other courses.
The edits required in this paragraph are mainly related to tenses. It is extremely important to:
1. Use the correct tenses- The study that was undertaken in the past needs to be referred to using the past tense. You cannot refer to a past event in the future tense.
2. Keep them consistent- If you unnecessarily shuttle between the past, present and future tenses, it will complicate the sense of timing and cause confusion as well as be grammatically incorrect.
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