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a new study conducted by researchers in the university of liverpool publish in the latest issue of the lancet suggest that there is no significant,long term benefit in administer imitiatate treatment to those of early epilepsy and frequent seizures.
editing the passage.in every sentence there was a mistake​

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Answered by phillipinestest
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1. A new study conducted by researchers in the University of Liverpool

2. published in the latest issue of the Lancet suggests

3. that there is no significant, long term benefit in administering

4. immediate treatment to those of early epilepsy and frequent seizures.

Explanation:

1. a new study conducted by researchers in the university of liverpool

Explanation:

A new sentence  always begins with a capital letter. So the sentence will begin with a capital 'A'.

'university of liverpool' is a proper noun as it is the name of a university. Hence the words 'University' and Liverpool will be in capital letters.

The edited sentence will be :  A new study conducted by researchers in the University of Liverpool

2. publish in the latest issue of the lancet suggest

Explanation:

Since the study has already been conducted, the tense of the following sentence will be in the past.

So the verb publish will be published.

' lancet'  is a proper noun so it should begin with a capital letter.

Since Lancet is a singular noun, so the verb in agreement of the subject will be 'suggests'.

The edited sentence is : published in the latest issue of the Lancet suggests

3.  that there is no significant, long term benefit in administer

Explanation:

The verb 'administer' will be used as a Gerund hence its form will change to  'administering'.

Hence the edited sentence is : that there is no significant, long term benefit in administering

4. imitiatate treatment to those of early epilepsy and frequent seizures.

Explanation:

The  correct word in agreement in place of imitiatate is 'immediate'.

Hence the edited sentence is : that there is no significant, long term benefit in administering

immediate treatment to those of early epilepsy and frequent seizures.

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