Question

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Last year, the student of class 9 were taken for a few camp to the shivalik hills. A of them had been to a same location earlier but for many of a student it was the new experience. The bys quickly pitched up a tents and got ready to cook dinner. A liitle teachers helped with the cooking while many of them wished to rest. The campfire warmed up the place. After dinner, the boys were told that next morning. They would go fishing at the river that folwed nearby. They were informed that there was few hope that they would catch an fish but it would certainly be an exciting experience!
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Answer 1

Last year, the student of class 9 were taken for a camp to the shivalik hills. Some of them had been to the same location earlier but for many a student it was the new experience. The boys quickly pitched up the tents and got ready to cook dinner. A few teachers helped with the cooking while many of them wished to rest. The campfire warmed up the place. After dinner, the boys were told that next morning. They would go fishing at the river that flowed nearby. They were informed that there was little hope that they would catch a fish but it would certainly be an exciting experience!
Please solve it fast ......


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Answer 2

last year student of class 9 were taken for camp to shivalik hills.all of the had been to a small location earlier but for many students it was new experience. Boys quickly pitched up tents and got ready to cook dinner.Teachers helped with cooking while many of them wished to rest. Campfire warmed up place. After dinner the boys were told that next morning they would go fishing at river
that flowed nearby. They were informed that there was hope that they would catch a fish but it would certainly be an exciting experience.