English, asked by arunbalan6518, 11 months ago

After his speech his father flick open the basket lead and play the pipe again where upon the snake is bring out people run in terror to save his life

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Answered by mariospartan
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In the given sentence there should be proper pauses and the use of conjunctions to make a proper sense out of the sentence.

EXPLANATION:  

The given sentence is written without any pauses and is not giving any proper meaning to it.

The given sentence is an example of a complex sentences where more than one action is taking place but it is not clear where one action ends and the other ones start, that's why commas and the conjunction And is used to make proper meaning.

There should be comma after speech, the second comma should be after again and after out the conjunction and should be used. By this, we now clearly know the actions proceeding other and there is a proper sequence of actions.

Also, people is used for plural so their would be used instead of his.  So, the final sentence would be: After his speech, his father flick open the basket lid and play the pipe again, where upon the snake is bring out and people run in terror to save their life.

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