After reading the book it was based on, several key plot elements were missing from the movie. Which revision best corrects the error in this sentence
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The right sentence is as follow:
After reading the book that the movie was based on, I noticed that the movie was missing several key plot elements.
- In the given sentence, the writer has used 'It' in the beginning and readers are not clear about what the 'It' means.
- As the writer is talking about the movie., it should be mentioned in the beginning.
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