Question

After reading the book it was based on, several key plot elements were missing from the movie. Which revision best corrects the error in this sentence

Answer 1

Answer:

The right sentence is as follow:

After reading the book that the movie was based on, I noticed that the movie was missing several key plot elements.

• In the given sentence, the writer has used 'It' in the beginning and readers are not clear about what the 'It' means.
• As the writer is talking about the movie., it should be mentioned in the beginning.