Question

Amits father is very industrial (correct sentence )

Answer 1

sentence is correct but there are no punctuations.

Answer 2

The error that is noticeable in the statement that has been provided in the query is not related to misuse of verb or style or any other functional depiction of English language. However, we can easily access to no use of punctuation in the statement. Moreover, "Amits" misses an apostrophe in the word to relate him to his father. Another grammatical defect is the missing "full-stop." Full stop is very necessary to end a statement else the statement will remain improper- just like a question-mark is essential in a query.

Anyhow, the rewritten sentence with correct utilization of grammatical devices is below.

"Amit's father is very industrial."