Amrita Kaur was a quiet woman who lived with her husband and two children in a small house in a suburb of Mumbai nothing much seemed to worry her and she went about her life without worrying other people she lived a very ordinary life until one day , last August , everything changed
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Amrita Kaur was a quiet woman who lived with her husband and two children in a small house in a suburb of Mumbai nothing much seemed to worry her and she went about her life without worrying other people she lived a very ordinary life until one day , last August , everything changed. She received a call from her husbands office. He had met an accident and was badly injured. He was in the hospital. She reached there and saw her husband lying on the bed. The doctor told her that he was badly hit by a car and the driver of that car had brought him here. He had already given the fee for the hospital but her husband was half parallelized. This meant that she had to go and look for a job. She was in a shock already but she didn't wanted to let her children know what had happened. So she let her husband be in the hospital till some time and told her children that their father was out for some official work and will return after a month or so. She tried for a job at a lot of places but couldn't find any because she was illiterate. So she decided to do a business. She gave some of her jewellery to the jeweller and in return took 70,000 rupees. She bought some sarees and other dresses at wholesale at a lower price and started selling them online. People were loving her sarees. Soon her business rose and she got a lot of profit. Amrita returned the money, took her jewellery and also bought new clothes for her shop. Soon she bought a showroom and her shop was opened her clothes became very popular and so did she. Meanwhile her husband's operation was successful and he was alright now. When he returned home he got to know everything. He was proud to have such a wife and also to become the owner of a vast company.
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