An elephant rely on its trunk
For it highly developed sense of
Smell. By raised the trunk up
In the air as moving it form
Side and side, it can determine
The location of friends.
The above paragraph has not been edited. There is an error in each line. Please correct experts
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Answer:
the trunk of elephant are very rare
Error correction
1. An elephant rely on its trunk - relies
The subject of the sentence is 'elephant'. It is a singular entity. The verb will thus be 'relies' and not 'rely'.
2. For it highly developed sense of -its
Since the subject is 'an elephant' it has to be replaced by a possessive pronoun which is 'its' and not 'it'.
3. Smell. By raised the trunk up -raising
Verbs that signify a tense or specific time period are known as finite verbs. When a tense is not required to be specified non finite verbs are to be used which can be in the form of present participle or an infinitive.
For the given sentence a non finite verb is required to express a general habit of an elephant.
The word 'by' determines it has to be a participle hence the correct verb is 'raising'.
4. In the air as moving it form - from
The word 'form' signifies a specific shape or figure; in this sentence a preposition is required.
From is the appropriate preposition to be used.
5. Side and side, it can determine -to
In this sentence a conjunction is not required. Instead a preposition is required to specify the direction. By is the most appropriate preposition.
6. The location of friends.- the, its.
Sentence six is a continuation of sentence five. Hence the article 'the' should not begin with a capital letter.
Before the word 'friends' a possessive pronoun has to be placed to specify whose friends.
The sentence thus becomes: the location of its friends.
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