Question

Article on my school achievements in about 1000 words

Answer 1

I was always one of the best students in the class during all my school years. I had always the best marks and I had honor rewards. However during the secondary school year was a bit different. That year was the worst in my life.

I was always good in mathematics and physics. I love those subjects a lot and I worked hard in the class. That year my grades decreased considerably. It was something unusual for me and I did not concentrate on my studies.

I didn't know what happen to me. Failure was unacceptable to me because I have never faced it before. I had a little fear from failure and fear haunted me. My father noticed something wrong with me. He was worried about me. I told him about my grades and my fillings. He looked at me and said:" Son, life is nothing without failure. You can't be always number one. You should sometimes accept the deception and you should try to overcome them because the real success is to learn from our mistakes."

Those words have changed my vision in life, I passed in the exam that year. The year after, the baccalaureate year was the best school year ever. I have learned to face the obstacles and I started the New Year with the new leaf of life. My grades were the best in the class, especially in mathematics , physics and philosophy. Yes , I have a great interest in philosophy because I love the way philosopher thinks. That year I was determine to get my diploma with the highest score. I worked hard and prepared myself. I did revision ever day. I also got the notes from my friend who is older than me and that helped me for better notes. I practiced sports also because sports and studies fit together. I practiced jogging every day with my friends and I went to swimming pool three times a week. All my class mates and teachers noticed the difference of my grades and work between the two years. That was a great provision. All over the year I continued my work and my grades were higher and higher. And in June we have to pass the baccalaureate exam. I was a little nervous on the first day but after I read the first subject all my fear disappeared. The entire subjects were easy for me even the math test which was hard for the majority of the students. After three weeks the result were given; I had my baccalaureate with very good grade.

I was third in my high school and the first in the class. My school teachers, family and friends were very happy with my flying colours result. That was very fruitful and indeed towards my success. Thus I went out with my friends to celebrate the day with the utmost joy.

It was a meaningful achievement for me because I learned to face failure and to mistakes and learn by mistakes.

I have amended a little. These are my comments :

-Sometimes mistakes in grammar but language used is mainly accurate, Mistakes arise from more complex language use
-Some variety in sentence structure, However, generally repetitive sentences are found
-Mainly basic vocabulary. Errors in use of more ambitious vocabulary.
-Relevant points
-Some coherence in paragraphing
-Not very well organized points
-Essay is slightly interesting
-A competent writer
-Generally communicates effectively with reader, presents effectively
-Engages attention of the reader
-Very easy to read
-Existence of thesis statement and topic sentences



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