as soon he arrived I could sense that something was out of place write a short story on it.
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"As soon as he arrived i could sense that something was out of place"
U can write a detective story, or else abt a murder.... u should add some suspicious sentences in it ok.....
I ll only give u hints bcz i know that u are having the capacity to write this....!!! Come on take it as a challenge...
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As soon as I arrived I could sense that something was out of place no one in my family received me with warmth. everybody was awfully serious my elder brother took me to a room and said that he had agreed to the partition of the family property to avoid day to day quarrel my second brother and his wife wanted the partition so I realised by everything was not normal in my cheerful family I could not released the idea that came and the property was divided I could hardly control my tears when my elder brother of Father Like figure out to me after my father's death place the watch father had given him on the heap of things to be divided I moved out wrote a letter to my elder brother and rushed to my city whom I had week with all my line share and other assets to my elder brother.