avantika is one of my close friends who comes to helped me whenever i am in trouble. im greatful with her visit me in the hospital and tell me about all the work did by my teachers. i hope we should be friends for many years . a friend which stands by you in good for bad times is a friend indeed . WRITES ERRORS
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akaur you are really so Lucky you got a friend like that I wish you both will be together forever
I would like to correct your paragraph.
Avantika is one of my closest friend who has helped me whenever I was in trouble. I am very grateful to her because of the times she selflesly visited me in the hospital and informed me about all the work done in the school. I hope we can stay friends for many years/ I hope we remain the best-est of friends until our hair grows white (optional to enhance).
A friend who stands with you in the good and the bad times is a friend indeed.
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Rest all was good Good try and keep it up!
Rest all was good Good try and keep it up! have a good day mate!! ◡
I am not a really good learned english speaker and in my learning stage myself, so I would apologize if there are any mistakes but I tried my best.