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Below is a letter written by Aakriti. She has made a few mistakes. Help her to edit the letter. Find the mistakes and make corrections.
B-32, sector-11
Rohini
New Delhi-110085

15.05. 2020

111, Solomon Heights
Ranjit Avenue
Amritsar

Subject: Description of hostel

Respected Muskan
How have you been? I hope my letter finds you in the best of health and spirits. It has been almost a month since I transferred to the boarding school. I am very happy in my new school.
The classes and dormitories are very spacious. There are well equipped science laboratories and a library with a great collection of books. The school has amazing sports facilities such as swimming pool, horse riding track and archery range.
I believe my life here will be interesting and enjoyable. Although I have made many new friends, I still miss you and the other friends. Please, pay my regards to your parents.
Your faithfully
Aakriti

Answers

Answered by rasheedmaqbool25
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Answer:                                                                                                  15.5.2020

From,

Aakriti,

B-32,Sector-11,

New Delhi-110085.        

To,

Muskan,

111,Solomon Heights,

Ranjit Avenue,

Amritsar.

                Subject : Description of Hostel.

          Dear Muskan,

                         How have you been ?I hope my letter find you in the best of health and spirits.It has been almost a month since I transferred from the boarding school.I am very happy in my new school.

                            The classes and the dormitories are very spacious.There are well equipped science laboratories and a library with a great collection of books.This school has amazing sports facilities such as- Swimming Pool,Horse Riding,Track and Archery Range

                             I believe my life here will be interesting and enjoyable.Although I have made many new friends.I still miss you and the other friends.

                              Please convey my regards to your parents.

                                                                                                     Your faithfully,

                                                                                                            Aakriti

        The above sentences are changed according to the question.      

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