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"Technology progresses with not deserve problems. The problem is the people's incompatibility with technology and the integration of technology into life. Thus, acceleration increases steadily. Most of the technology that exists today is not the product of the last 2-3 years. About 15-20 years ago, the technology survives. But it was very clear that no one would get it if it was made available in its previous form. Indeed in the virtual environment in the 1980s, today is much accessible and logical room available. And thousands like this appear as a result of a long story. As time goes on, technology will be further reduced by the use of technology. Thus, technology will become more marketable during development.
As a result, when the lack of resources in front of the technology appears to be able to exceed the size of this technology will be realized by completely blocking the market.
Perhaps it will not be tempting to develop technology when we fix problems in the future. And then the fact that we are the product of technology becomes inevitable."

Answer 1

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Answer 2

Technology today is an integral part of everyday life. Rapid advancements in the field has increased the pace of life,effectively coordinating reality with imagination. In other words we virtually move with our thoughts and as we look ahead, today's technology becomes out dated tomorrow.