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The life changing victory

2 years ago,I wasn’t the same i use to talk a lot and had a more fun in my life 2 years ago in grade 5 i joined a new school on my first day it was a good day the first lesson was games and i made friends both named ahmed we played together and gave an striking performance

As time past by I made new friends and later we became a group of 5 or 6 as time past many events came,I was really good in sports and but never had enough confidence to join any competition but one day sports day was announced and I thought to go in participate,
I was participating in a race i was a good runner,but wasn’t confident that would i win and the day came when the race started and i closed by eyes and just ran so fast not looking back and crossed the finish line,
I was so happy winning the first competition I have ever completed in I could see my mother in crowd
I gained alot of courage by wining the race and start to race alot but now i am changed and i don’t race or run anymore i wish the school sats again and i can be fit again and be with my friends again i can never forget astounding part of my life

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