Question

can you rewrite this?
One night, returning
home, much intoxicated, from one of my haunts about town, I fancied that the cat avoided my presence.

Answer 1

Explanation:

this is the explanation.

One day while returning to home I was thinking about one of my haunts abt the town which was disturbing me , that I noticed that the cat ignored my presence.

this is the rewrite

One night, returning

home, much intoxicated, from one of my haunts about town, I fancied that the cat avoided my presence.

Answer 2

The given text can be rewritten as:

One night when I came home quite drunk from one of my hang-out places in town, I thought that the cat was avoiding being around me.  

Or, in simpler words:

One night I had gone to one of my usual places in town. I came home quite drunk and felt that the cat was avoiding being around me.

Tips for rewriting texts:

1. Split complex sentences into two or more sentences. This will add clarity to the rewritten text.

2. Use simpler words. For example, ‘haunts’ can be replaced by ‘hang-out places’ or ‘usual places’.