Question

Can you tell me which one sound better? i cant choose

1,Hi. My name is AAA. I’m very happy today to have the opportunity to be here
and introduce myself to you. I live in a small town which is called Băc yên .
At present, I’m a senior at Bac yen high school where I am taught by wonderful
teachers. My favorite subject at school is English. I enjoy listening to it
every single time when there is an english class. So this is the reason I want to
become a tour guide. Futhermore, I have the chance to talk with different races
of human and explore new things and improve the quality of my life as well. Even
though my knowledge of english isn’t good yet but I promise myself to be better every day.

2,
Hi. My name is AAA, and I’m very happy to have the opportunity
to be here and introduce myself to you.
I live in a small town which is called Băc yên.
At present, I’m a senior at Bac yen high school where I am taught by wonderful teachers.
My ambition is to become a tour guide to
interact with different people and learn new things from them,
so whenever I have free time, I will expose myself to English
like reading books and listening to Taylor Swift songs.
Apart from that, I’m also fascinated by everything related to Japan.
Even though my knowledge of English isn’t great yet, I promise myself to get better everyday.

Answer 1

Answer:

u better choose second one it is good.

Answer 2

Answer:

i think first one is better.. that simple and good