Geography, asked by ayushhero21, 1 year ago

CATEGORY II - EDITING
irections (O.Nos. I 10 23) The following passages have not been edited. There as one error in each line
one word and write it with the correction in the spaces given. The first one has been done for you in
aestions as examples.
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one
One moming I finished one business at the bank
a) and was returning in pick up my motorbike which I had left
b) in the parking lot outside. Suddenly he realised that I had
c) lost the bike key. Upset, I searched about it in the bank. A bank
d) employee tried to help me find it and in vain.
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when
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before
eople should think twice when they
a) adopt a pet. Pets became adopted
b) member of the family.
-) One cannot think at ill-treating them.
- They had to be given wholesome
-) food. In case they fell sick,
they should be taken for a vet.
-) Some People acquire pet and
) now neglect them.
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Answered by Anonymous
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Answer:

I'm writing the whole passage again, with underlining and highlighting the edited words.

One moming I finished one business at the bank

a) And was returning to pick up my motorbike which I had left

b) In the parking lot outside. Suddenly I realised that I had

c) Lost my bike key. Upset, I searched about it in the bank. A bank

d) Employee tried to help me find it but in vain.

People should think twice before they

a) Edopt a pet. Pets become adopted

b) Member in the family.

c) One cannot think of ill-treating them.

d) They have to be given wholesome

e) Food. In case they fall sick,

f) They should be taken to a vet.

g) Some people buy pet and

h) Then neglect them.

Hope it Helps ya!


ayushhero21: thanks
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