Question

check grammatical error​

Answer 1

Hey mate!!

There are no grammatical errors.

Very nice essay. Appreciated.

Answer 2

Change here: "his father name is Jainulabiddin". write: "his father's name was Jainulabiddin Marakayar."

Change here: "his mother name is Ashiama." write: his mother's name is Ashiama Jainulabiddin."

change here : "he used to collect tamarind seeds and sell them" write: "he used to collect tamarind seeds and sold them"

Change here: "he loves children" write: "he loved children"

Change here:"if we read this book, we can able to understand about his life, about his journey of success etc". write: " if we read this book, we can be (will be) able to understand about his life, his tragic journey of success etc.