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Monday
23/5/19
9:00
I went to my uncle's house it was a memorable day to me I played with my cousin we enjoyed a lot in uncles house my grandmother blessed me we flew kites and played types of games like football Kabaddi we went to amusement park there we rode on joyful rides there we also eat ice cream they are these are wonderful days we spend 10 days in uncles house my uncle is so good.
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Hey mate here's your answer
This paragraph is nice but needs some changes
1.)You should write uncle in place of mama
2.)we enjoyed a lot instead of enjoy.
3.)We flew kites and played many games like kabaddi and football.
4.)We also went to amusement park.
5.)We also eat tasty ice cream there .
6.) My uncle is very nice.
7.)It was a wonderful time for me.
If you are writing a diary entry, you should not write that you spend 10 days
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