Question

correct it 5. When Shyam reach Ramu's house, his
classmates arrive already. Ramu introduced
Shyam to them. Ramu's brother bring
snacks from the market. Ramu serve
them to all his friends. Then they all dance.
My doctor advise me to take rest, yet
I also danced.​

Answer 1

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When Shyam reached Ramu's house, his classmates has arrived already.Ramu introduced Shyam to everyone.Ramu's brother brought snacks from the market. Ramu served the snacks to all his friends.Then they all danced.My doctor advised me to take rest but I also danced .

Additional information :

• If the sentence starts with ' when ' and first part of sentence is past indefinite then the second part of sentence must be in past participle form.
• Snack is a non living thing so we can't use pronoun 'them' in place of snack.
• 'Them ' is used for living things.
• 'yet' is not used when there is opposition of something.
• 'But ' is used when there is opposition in the sentence.

Answer 2

Explanation:

When Shyam reached Ramu's house, his classmates has arrived already.Ramu introduced Shyam to everyone.Ramu's brother brought snacks from the market. Ramu served the snacks to all his friends.Then they all danced.My doctor advised me to take rest but I also danced