D. Rewrite the following passage using correct punctuation.
ellie stood and rested her back against the apple tree of which she had been plucking apples
felt good to rest for even a few minutes the warm fall breeze dried the sweat on her brow she closed her eyes and listened to the familiar sounds around her her youngest brother had recently learnt to swim and he was shrieking with glee in the nearby stream just beyond there was the
mill the turning water wheel rattled and groaned as it moved it reminded her of her fathers hard work and how he complained of his aching back each night ellie sighed will things never change for us she said to herself
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Answer:
Ellie ( first letter capitals)
from which
and felt good after resting for few
minutes( no {a} before few minutes)
around (her) only ONE TIME
youngest brother WHO had recently.
father's hardwork
Ellie sighed( in capitals first letter of the name)
will things never change for us?
last m full stop to put.
After apples FULL STOP.
After her brow FULL STOP.
After nearby stream FULL STOP.
After graonedFULL STOP.
AFTER EACH NIGHT FULL STOP.
Answer:
This is the refined paragraph for your refence-
Ellie stood and rested her back against the apple tree from which she had been plucking apples. It felt good to rest for even a few minutes. The warm fall breeze dried the sweat on her brow. She closed her eyes and listened to the familiar sounds around her. Her youngest brother had recently learnt to swim and he was shrieking with glee in the nearby stream. Just beyond that there was the mill. The turning water wheel rattled and groaned as it moved. It reminded her of her father's hard work and how he complained of his aching back each night. Ellie sighed, "Will things never change for us?" she said to herself.
After adding certain words and phrases which include particles, tenses and connectors, this passage looks more readable according to the grammar rules of English and rules of spoken English.
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