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Dairy entry summer vacation hw

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Answered by NightFury
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Posted on November 9, 2016 by 128grimshawr

For your homework this week you are going to write a diary about your best day ever! This might be about a holiday, a trip out, your birthday, Christmas day or the day you got a pet!

Remember our Success Criteria for a diary:

Includes ‘Dear Diary’

Is written in the 1st person

Is written in the past tense

Has an introduction to set the scene

Talks about opinions, thoughts, feelings

Uses time conjunctions to show when things happened

Writes about events that are important to the writer

Please write at least 6 sentences.

I look forward to reading them  

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22 Responses to Homework- Diary Entry

Thomas says:

November 13, 2016 at 10:17 am

Dear diary,
Today was the best day of my life.I went with my tall and exited dad to the man united match at old Trafford. When the match started I saw flehaniyn and Wayne Rooney from United . When they scored I screamed like crazy .At the end I saw the boring blue Ipswich fans sulking from London.

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Miss Whalley says:

November 15, 2016 at 8:31 pm

A good diary entry – you’re very luck going to Old Trafford! Don’t forget to check for missing capital letter.

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Jack Warburton says:

November 13, 2016 at 11:56 am

Dear Diary,

Today was a very funny day, my stupid sister and me were messing about. About five minutes after we started playing she banged her foot on something (something to do with me ). At fist I laughed but then she started sobbing and I thought I was going to get in trouble like I alweys get in . all of a sudden, the most peculiar thing happend .Here teeres were as white as a door . we would’nt stop louthing for ages and ages and ages and ages

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