Question

debate on on the topic are we progressing

pls check and tell the mistakes and improvement points and give marks​

Answer 1

2nd line not presented the right form is present
8th line not if as these resource are not renewable the right from is if these resources are not renewed
8th line not so will the right from is then they will
these are the mistakes
I will give 8.5 out of 10
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