Question

Develop a stroy"it was rainy day and i was all alone at home . it was pitch dark outside. suddenly i heard someone knocking at my door..

Answer 1

   It was a rainy day and I was alone at home. It was pitch dark outside so I decided to stay inside. Suddenly I heard someone knocking on my door. I looked out the window to see if I could find out who it was. I couldn't see anything so I went towards the door. "WHO IS IT!?" I yelled, but didn't get an answer. I opened the door and seen nothing. I kept on looking but nothing was there. I stepped outside, which was the biggest mistake ever...... 

Answer 2

It was a rainy day and o was all alone at home.it was pitch dark outside, suddenly i heard someone knocking at my door.i was spooked yet went to see whose at the door. i looked through the peeping hole to fine no one standing outside which in turn made me even more anxious of whats going on .i go back and sit by the tv in the living room with emergency light switched on. again some one comes knocking the door. this time it starts to creep me out making me think all weird things ,i make my self strong and go very slowly towards the door this time making sure i have a torch with me. i peep through the hole once more and flash my torch light to see who is it. for the next few minutes  , i don,t find any one or anything. i brave my self up and open the door slightly to see clearly whats making the door bell ring. i am shocked to find what i see. there standing slightly under the door peep whole height a fragile looking kid probably lost . i for once was revealed of all the crazy thoughts i had and opened the door fully to let the kids in . made her come inside and shut the door. i asked her what she was doing outside my door so late in this terrible weather . to my surprise she tells me that she came looking for her ball and got lost in the streets and the closest house she could find is mine.