Developing a story- it was around 6:30 am and I was going to school. As soon as I reached shivaji chowk I saw a man roaming suspiciously nearby a jewellery shop....
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Answer: good story beginning.
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- It was around 6:30 am and I was going to school.
- As soon as I reached Shivaji Chowk.
- I saw a man roaming suspiciously nearby a jewellery shop.
- I guessed that he was a thief who was looking at the shop like this.
- Then I saw that he was looking at the owner who was eating food.
- I judged that he was hungry so I bought him some food and asked him to eat it with me.
- He became so happy and ate it with me.
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