Question

dialogue writing between a father and son, on cricket match. pls check

rohit-aap kya kar rahe he?

pita ji-mei india aur sri lanka ka cricket match dek raha hu

rohit-kaun sa team bat kar raha he

pita-ab india bat kar raha he.dhoni ko 1 century mila

pita-hay ram!

rohit-maliga ne ek viket liya.dhoni out ho gaee!!

pita-teek he..dhoni run out ho gaee

rohit-ab kan aaoonga?

pita-ab virat kohli aa raha he

rohit- kohli meri sabse priy khiladi he..

pita-yadi usne ache tarah se kela to india zarror jeetungi

Answer 1

There are some mistakes like
1.. Instead of bat write bating.
2.. In fourth line of dialogue
Pita- ab India bating kar rahi hai aur dhoni ne century bana bhi li
3. Something wrong in the between.
4. In last dialogue
Pita - yadi usne achhe tarah se khela to india match zaroor jeetega. Hope it is helpful for you.