Question

E Read the paragraph. Identify the errors in the sentences and rewrite the
paragraph correctly in your notebook
Last month Sushmitha went on a holidays with her family to Dalhouse in the
morning she woke up to the sight of the lush green forest and the majestic
mountain. At night she gazed at the starry skies. One morning as she was
looking out of the window of her cottages, she saw several, large, dark cloud
covering the blue skies. Soon, the sun hid behind the dark doud. Sushmitha
saw a flock of bird flying across the sky. They had probably anticipated the
rain and were heading towards their nests. A little later, she heard thunders
There was another sound that alarmed her. This sound did not come from the
sky. The sound came from the lawn in the rear of the cottage. She went to the
windows that overlooked the lawn. To her amazement, she saw some pretty
peacock. That day she learnt that there are some bird that avoid the rain, why
there are some that enjoy it, just like human​

Answer 1

Answer:

it would be she saw several large and dark clouds

Explanation:

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Answer 2

Answer:

Last month Sushmitha went on a holiday with her family to Dalhousie. In the morning she woke up to the sight of the lush green forest and the majestic mountains. At night she gazed at the starry skies. One morning as she was looking out of the window of her cottages, she saw several, large, dark clouds covering the blue skies. Soon, the sun hid behind the dark cloud. Sushmitha saw a flock of bird flying across the sky. They had probably anticipated the rain and were heading towards their nests. A little later, she heard thunders. There was another sound that alarmed her. This sound did not come from the sky. The sound came from the lawn in the rear of the cottage. She went to the windows that overlooked the lawn. To her amazement, she saw some pretty peacocks. That day she learnt that there are some birds that avoid the rain, while there are some that enjoy it, just like humans.