Question

edit the following paraghap using appropriate spelling and punctuation marks? For My Eigteenth(1) Birthday I wanted to invite many friends. I sent a (2) invitation to Ritu (3) charu (4) Diksha and Abhinav (5) i decorated (6) my house and cooked many delicasies (7) i weighted (8) for my friends but no one came (9) i was brokehearted (10).​

Answer 1

Answer:

For My Eighteenth Birthday I wanted to invite many friends. I sent an invitation to Ritu,charu,Diksha and Abhinav. i decorated my house and cooked many delicacies.i waited for my friends but no one came . I was broken hearted .

Answer 2

Answer:

I wanted to invite many friends for my Eighteenth birthday. So I sent a invitation to Ritu, Charu, Diksha and Abhinav. Then I decorated my house and cooked many delicious food items. I waited for my friends but no one attended/came to the party. At the end, I was so upset/broken-hearted.