Question

Edit the following paragraph, there is one error in each line :



The photograph is a prized possession, for everyone,
be (a)
While all of the photographs make us happy (b)
the other may make us feel disheartened (c)
In a poem 'A Photograph' the poet reminisces (d)
how a photograph showing their mother and her two cousins (e)
on an sea beach delighted her mother. (f)
After much years this photograph reminds the poet (g)
of their mother who is no more now It causes many sorrow to the poet. (h)​

Answer 1

Answer:on an sea delighted her mother

Explanation:it is wrong because “an” is used for a, e, I, o, u only not for consonants like b, c, d, f, etc.

Answer 2

A photograph is a prized possession, for everyone.

While one of the photographs makes us happy

the other may make us feel disheartened.

In the poem 'A Photograph' the poet reminisces

how a photograph showing her mother and her two cousins

on a sea beach delighted her mother.

After many years this photograph reminds the poet

of her mother who is no more now It causes many sorrow to the poet.

Explanation:

• The indefinite article 'a' will be used before 'photograph'.
• 'One' will be the correct pronoun to be used.
• The correct verb to be used will be 'make' instead of 'makes'.
• The definite article 'the' will be used before 'poem'.
• The correct pronoun will be 'her' and not 'their'.
• The indefinite article 'a' will be used because 'sea' has a consonant pronunciation.
• 'Many' will be used instead of 'much'.
• 'Her' will be the correct pronoun.

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