Question

Edit the following passage.
Dr. Kalam exhort everybody to be unique in his or her own way. Hawking's profile reveals how he has overcome his disabilities to become the supernova in Physics. ​

Answer 1

Answer:

This passage contains grammatical errors.

Dr.Kalam exhorted everybody to be unique in his or her own way.

(Here the sentence is given in past tense but the word exhort is given in present tense. So it is made past by adding ed to it.)

Hawking's profile revealed how he had overcome his disabilities to become the supernova in Physics.

( the sentences is in past tense and in this sentence the word 'reveal' is given in present tense and it is changed to past tense by adding ed to it. 'Has' is in present tense which is changed to 'had' which denotes past tense.)

Answer 2

Answer:

Dr. Kalam exhorted everybody to be 'unique' in their own way.

Hawking’s profile reveals how he has 'overcome his disabilities' to become a supernova in Physics.

The above passage has been edited for grammatical correctness.  

Explanation:

While editing a passage one should check for the right grammar usage, the right use of words and the correct tense of the verb as well. In addition, commonly confused words or misspelled words should also be carefully edited.

There are 'many people' who have proven their 'uniqueness even when fighting adversities' or limitations like Kalam and Hawking.