Question

edit the following passage

Hello,good morning (1) viewers. This (2) was Sunil Gavaskar with Ravi Sastry . Welcome to uppal cricket (3) stadium , Hyderbad. It is (4) an sunny morning. Electrifying atmosphere in this (5) jampack stadium.

Answer 1

Answer:

Explanation:

1) Hello, Good morning

2) viewers. I

3) am Sunil Gavaskar......

4)It’s

5)a

Answer 2

Hello, Good morning (1) all viewers.  

This (2) is Sunil Gavaskar with Ravi Sastry .  

Welcome to the Uppal Cricket (3) Stadium , Hyderabad.  

It is (4) a sunny morning.  

There is an electrifying atmosphere in this (5) jam-packed stadium .

Explanation:

• Sentence 1: There is wrong punctuation. ‘Good Morning’ is a greeting so it should be in capital letters. There should be a gap between Hello and good morning. Since it is being addressed to every viewer so the word ‘all’ should be inserted before viewers.

• Sentence 2 : The commentary is in the present tense so was is replaced by ‘is’.  

• Sentence 3 :Uppal is a proper noun so it should be written in capital letters and specified by the article ‘the’.  

• Sentence 4: The word ‘sunny’ begins with the consonant ‘s’ so it should be preceded by the article ‘a’ and not ‘an’.  

• Sentence 5: ‘Electrifying atmosphere’ is a situation so it should be preceded by an adverb and a verb-‘there is’ in this case. The correct usage of the word ‘jam pack’ is ‘jam packed’.