Question

Edit the following passage. To be successful at life one would be hard working and has sound value time. If he turned rich, he should remained balanced.

Answer 1

To be successful in life, one should be hard working and should value time. If he turned to be rich,he will remain balanced

Answer 2

Answer: To be successful in life one should be hardworking and have sound value system. If he turns rich, he should remain balances, and not lose his head.

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