Question

Edit the following passage
Today's children likes video games so many that they spend a lot of time and money playing it.
It is there favourite pass time.
They fail to understand that they are wasting their most precious time by neglecting their studies. A video games made their minds dull , hinder their ability to think and turn them violent. ​

Answer 1

Today's children like videogames so many
that they spent a lot of time and money playing it
They fail to understand what they are wasting their most precious time by neglecting there studies. A video games made thier mind dull, hinder there ability to think and turn them violent