English, asked by pinky3030, 10 months ago

Edit the following .... The main conflict in the story ‘Amigo Brothers’ is that off ambition. Both the

friends want to be champions. But only one of them can be the champ. So

they decide to fight it out. In the end, they realize that they value there

bonding more than their ambition.​

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Answered by orangesquirrel
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The passage has been edited as follows:

The main conflict in the story ‘Amigo Brothers’ is that of ambition. Both the friends want to be champions. But only one of them can be the champion. So they decide to fight it out. In the end, they realised that they value their bonding more than their ambition.

  • The first error is the incorrect usage of preposition. The preposition 'off' is used to say putting away or moving away something. In this case, 'of' is required to show a connection.
  • The verb 'realise' should have the past form in the passage as it describes an event of the past.
  • Also, the word 'there' refers to a place or position so it cannot be used in this case. The word 'their' shows a possessive form.
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