Question

edit the paragraph
3 (a) It is really shock that (b) wild animals is being killed on a very large scale

(c) There has been an craze for leather goods,

(d) We don't realise how many cruelty
(e) towards those helpless creatures
(1) we were encouraging by using the goods.

(g) There are much who wear
(h) fur coats and jackets with a fur lining.​

Answer 1

Answer:

Explanation:

A) INSTEAD OF SHOCK IT SHOULD BE SHOCKING

B)INSTEAD  OF IS  IT SHOULD BE ARE

C)INSTEAD OF AN IT SHOULD BE A

D)INSTEAD OF MANY IT SHOULD BE MUCH

E)INSTEAD OF THOSE IT SHOULD BE THESE

F)INSTEAD OF WERE IT SHOULD BE ARE

G)INSTEAD  OF MUCH IT SHOULD BE MANY

H)INSTEAD OF WITH IT SHOULD BE OF

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Answer 2

Here's how to edit a paragraph and correct the errors:

3 (a) It is really shocking that

(b) wild animals are being killed on a very large scale

(c) There is a craze for leather goods,

(d) We don't realise how much cruelty

(e) towards the helpless creatures

(1) we are encouraging by using the goods.

(g) There are many who wear

(h) fur coats and jackets with a furry lining.​

 

What to look for while editing texts and correcting errors:

• Incorrect tenses (are/were)
• Inconsistent singular and plural usage
• Incorrect word form (shock/shocking)
• Incorrect preposition usage (a/an/the)

 

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