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Children in schools is constantly told to be achivements oriented rather than creativity oriented. In their goodness to intention to please others, they slowled forget to be children and lost touched with their inner selves. This is when the use to Art in schools becomes therapeutic in nature. It allows children to be encouraged ​

Answer 1

The order is incorrect and then correct.

1. is, are
2. achievements, achiever
3. goodness, good (goodness to- please cut to after this)
4. touched, touch
5. to, of
6. it, art ( not sure)

MARK AS BRAINLIEST AND FOLLOW

GIVE❤

Answer 2

Answer:

Explanation:

(1)Achievments changed into - achievement (2)to intention change into - to intend (3) slowed change into - slowly (4) touched change into - touch (5) use to art change into - use of art.