Question

Edit the passage given below. Each line has one mistake.

On reaching his home he entire broke down, and became prey to the most violent agitation. The vulgarity of those twins, and the gross materialism of Mrs. Otis, was naturally extremely annoying, but what really distress him most was that he had been unable to wear the suit of mail.​

Answer 1

Answer:

1. completely instead of entire

2. remove the word 'naturally'

3. 'distressed' instead of distress

4. add 'the' before 'most'

Answer 2

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Following words have been edited in the passage :

On reaching his room he $\Large{\bcancel{entire} \:entirely}$ broke down, and became prey to the most violent $\Large{\bcancel{agitation} \:agitations}$.The vulgarity of those twins, and the gross materialism of Mrs. Otis,$\Large{\bcancel{was} \:were}$ naturally extremely annoying, but what really $\Large{\bcancel{distress} \:distressed}$ him most was that he had been unable to wear the suit of mail.