Question

Edit the passage:
It was Louisa Mebbin which drew
attentions to the fact if the goat was in
death throes from the mortal wound
of bullet, when no trace of the rifle's deadly
work would be found on the tiger.
Evidently the wrong animal was been
hit, but the beast of prey had
succumbed to heart failure causing
by the sudden report of a rifle.

Answer 1

It was Louisa Mebbin who drew attention to the fact that the goat was in death throes from a mortal bullet wound ,while no trace of the rifle's deadly work could be found on the tiger. Evidently the wrong animal had been hit, and the beast of prey had succumbed to heart failure caused by the sudden by the sudden report of the rifle.