Question

edit the passage once a stranger had a attack in influenza during the illness he has nothing to do so he kept look at the face to some​

Answer 1

Actual passage :-

once a stranger had a attack in influenza during the illness he has nothing to do so he kept look at the face to some​

Editing the passage :-

Once a stranger had a attack $\bold{of}$influenza during the illness he $\bold{had}$nothing to do so he kept look at the face to some​.

Changes to be remembered :-

•While editing a passage ,if the matter is of past,we must see that the verbs are also arranged in past tense

•We must have knowledge of AUXILARY verbs too .

•And while editing ,see that they confuse us ,don’t get confused maximum passages are dealt with past only.

•Use past participles in the past tense

Answer 2

Answer: 8th word=an,10th word=by

Explanation:1) an is added because first letter of attack is a vowel

2)  influenza is a cause by which the man got sick