English, asked by manandarak2493, 1 year ago

editing, could anyone check my answers?

In ancient times there was a rich and powerful king who rule over
rule- ruled
a vast kingdom. Pratap Singh was her advisor as well as close friend.
her- his
Caravan-loads brought daily wealth of his capital and his kingdom
Loads- loaded
was well administered by his ministers for guidance of Pratap Singh.
I don't know the answer for this one
The only irritation the king sometimes suffered were to see the ills of Famine, epidemic and wars.
were- was

Answers

Answered by AnshBhalla
12
Everything is correct except loads- loaded it will be brought-bring and the answer that you don't know is for- in.
Answered by phillipinestest
7

Editing

1. In ancient times there was a rich and powerful king who ruled over

a vast kingdom.

2. Pratap Singh was his advisor as well as close friend.

3. Loaded Caravans brought daily wealth to his capital , and his kingdom

was well administered by his ministers under the guidance of Pratap Singh.

4. The only irritation the king sometimes suffered from was to see the ills of famine, epidemic and wars.

Explanation:

  • In the first sentence the tense used is the simple past so the phrasal verb will be 'ruled over'.
  • Since the subject in the first sentence is the king, who is masculine, so in the second sentence the possessive pronoun related to the king will be 'his'.
  • 'Caravan loads' is always followed by the name of the goods they bring. Since the goods are not mentioned thus the word loaded should be used before caravan- Loaded Caravans in sentence three.
  • A preposition should  connect  wealth and capital and the appropriate preposition is 'to'.
  • Since there are two separate sentences joined by 'and' there should be a comma before 'and'.
  • The third sentence continues stating the ministers being guided by Pratap Singh so the preposition 'under' has to be used and the word guidance has to be signified by the article'the'.
  • In the fourth sentence the word 'suffered' will be followed by 'from' and since it is in the singular the verb will be 'was'.

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