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editing dance Ozone Layer play an important role in the survival to living being on an earth but the scientist have find a hole in the main reason for this was the release of harmful gas in Supersonic aircraft if we do not pay attention at it our survival should be in danger editing task ​

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Answered by orangesquirrel
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The passage has been edited as follows:

Ozone Layer plays an important role in the survival of living beings on the earth but the scientists have found a hole and the main reason for this was the release of harmful gases from Supersonic aircraft. If we do not pay attention to it, our survival would be in danger.

  • Singular subjects should be followed by singular plurals and plural subjects should have plural verbs. In this case, 'ozone layer' is a singular subject so we have used a singular verb 'plays'. Also, plural verb 'have' should have a plural subject 'scientists'.
  • We should also use proper articles in places such as 'the'( definite article) before the noun 'earth' as it refers to a specific subject.
  • Usage of preposition such as of, to, etc. is incorrect in various places.
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